Abe: Introducing Rachel Marr.
Rachel: Smooth. I can tell you've done this before
A. Hey, you're the one with all the press experience. Show me how it's done.
Rachel *clears throat* You've heard about him in the pages of Archaeological Digest. You've read his extraordinary treatise on the demise of the Mayans...
A: The Mayans? I've never...
Rachel: *quietly* Just go with it. And you've seen him covered in dust on the local news. His face is everywhere - and what a handsome face it is - please welcome Abraham Osiensky.
A: You think I'm handsome?
R: Sure. Now you go.
A: Uh...Introducing Rachel Marr, the girl who has it all: beauty, brains and a phenomenal acting ability that's propelled her to fame most people only dream about. She can speak four languages...
R: It's more like, three, but we'll go with that.
A: And she's richer than God. But underneath all that glam is a really nice person. I should know - she just saved my neck in a major way.
R: Aw. You're so sweet, Abe. *pinches his cheek*
A: *jerks away* That's why it's easy to overlook her shortcomings.
R: Shortcomings? Like what?
A: You're scared of bats. And you drive like you've escaped from a mental institution.
R: Just because I don't like sitting in bat poo doesn't mean I'm scared of them. You're the real the chicken here, buddy. *flaps arms like chicken wings* Brock!
A: Oh shut up.
25 comments:
Haha really cute! I loved it :)
Great job!
Haha, they're great! I like how she didn't dispute that she drives like she's escaped from a mental institution.
Funny! I had animal poo in my dialog too! haha :)
Loved this conversation!
How fun! :)
I learned so much in so little words. The energy was good and so was the humor. Nice!
Hee hee, I really enjoyed the humour in this piece - great work!
*Brock!*
I love the playful banter. It was almost like I was listening to the conversation rather than reading it.
Ha! Great characters!
I liked hearing about their quirks.
Ha ha! Very cute and entertaining. :)
LOL. You drive like you've escaped from a mental institution! hahaha. Great job!
Clever exchange. I loved it. It was very entertaining. I loved the "Just because I don't like sitting in bat poo..." part and of course the "and you drive like you've escaped from a mental institution."
Great job.
I love the chemistry in this exchange, Melodie :) So much fun! Fantastic job!
Lots of fun. I loved that she was afraid of bats. Nice detail.
I'm lovin' this Melodie! You gave me quite a lot in this little tidbit. Great job:)
I really like your writing design, do continue producing! I’ll be back!
hilarious. I love that she drives like she's escaped from a mental institute.
I like the strong interview 'voice' in this piece, like a screenplay.
Love it! Great voices :)
Have to admit I'm scared of bats too! Driving like she escaped from a mental institution ... that's a great line!
These two definitely made me smile :-)
Job well done!
I couldn't help but smile as I read this. Nice job!
This was so cute and so funny! I love the chemistry these two have. Great!!!
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